3rd Jan 2012, take a look at this, what do you think?
Take a look at this copy and tell me what you think. The QR code & web address goes to squeeze page but not set up.
Happy New Year to you lovely people, but now I need your help.
URGENT HELP NEEDED DEADLINE 4TH JANUARY 2012
I have got myself into a situatiuon: In July 2011 I accepted an invite to put a full page ad in RIBI Architechs London Directory. The Ad sits adjacent page to Robin Monnotti Architechs who gets the write up for the house which we all worked on.
Orginally I was in a 3 way split with other trades, the Builder & the Plumber, but they have dropped out & as I was the deal maker I am having to take the full load, cost and the ad.
This is an excellent opportunity to connect with one of my target markets and I really want to get the most out of it but I could crash & burn here if I dont get it right. Its costing me £2140 + Vat and I can not get out of it.
Can you help me write this Killer copy. All critism welcome, my no 07971 993698 or firstname.lastname@example.org or
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